The cloaked maiden floats through the hall, her dress, which is the color of a sky that can't choose between sunny or cloudy, trailing behind her. You can't see her face, but somehow you know she is beautiful . As she walks away over the black and white tiles, you are left alone in the grand, deserted hallways.
An attempt at present-tense... Nah, still don't like writing it.
Also, I noticed that Qui from Freckles and Pointe Shoes has this neat little thing where she does these type of stylized lists. I think I'll try it:
<< Loving >>
Writing
Blogging
Star Wars
Followers <3
<< Wishing >>
That August would come
That it was NaNoWriMo every month
<< Listening >>
Unstoppable- China Anne McClain
Watch Me- Bella Thorne and Zendaya
Hit the Lights- Selena Gomez
Oh I LOVE that picture!! I dunno exactly why but I love it!!
ReplyDeleteYeah present tense can be rather awkward!! You pulled it off fine though :)